It's alright it's just a matter of time 'till I find my feet

One of my goals for a while now has been to learn how to storyboard. I've been feeling a bit discouraged--like the resources I need to learn this skill are inaccessible to me--so I decided to jump in and learn by doing. I plan to storyboard short scenes from a variety of my favorite movies. I need to learn the basics, and for now I think that this will provide me with plenty to work on. (If anyone has experience storyboarding and feels like giving me a critique either in a comment or an e-mail, I would appreciate it. I have no ego about this--just trying to learn.)

Here's my first attempt:




It's from the beginning of this clip from Kill Bill Vol. 1: